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UR Wish, MY Command…. Twinj (part 12)

Hi guys… I m so sorry for being late but kya karun this exams… Leave it… plz don’t ask me to continue it bcz if I would do so I’ll bore u all bcz I don’t have anything to drag in it and also my father will be back on 3rd dec so I won’t be able to post it… So I ll try to end it asap..

Guys and hw can I forgot… Mere acche din aagaye waapis… Mujhe firse 25 comments mile… I can’t define hw much happy I m.. Plz aaj bi utnehi cmmnts dedo… Plz frnd samaj kar…

Thanksgiving…

Dreamer….Arundati, sohi, sameera, sidmin23, priya23( I m so happy that u broke ur silence) , simiyy, twinj, ramya, Franciee, kai( as u requested I have included the English translation), chiku, monica, sushmita, Purnima.agrawal30, rashiverma2199, vipul, presha, sidvee, twinjsidmin( vassu di I m posting for u now happy na…) pavvu, zuha fathima, sidmin, sweta, jisha di, aksa.nikoria..

Link for previous part-

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Recap- revelation of uvs plan.. Twinkle kidnapped by uv and uv’s demand…

Disclaimer- no proof reading so plz ignore the mistakes..
Today’s epi is boring so plz bear with me …

Lets begin..

Twinkle’s POV (my first ever pov I don’t know how it will be)

“Itni jaldi nahi uv” (“not so fast uv”) was all I could here… I recognized the voice… Its of my kunj… He is back… Finally now I’ll be able be able to ask forgiveness from him… Hw… uv have fallen down and kunj with a closed fist… Haan kunj ne maara… Yeehh… Uv ka yahi haal hona chahiye.. KUNJ… Kunj plz get up… Kunj stood up… Ab yeh dono kya kar rahe… Yeh dono fight me jhud gaye… I hope kunj ko kuch na ho… Yeh kya kunj niche… Kunj ke face se tho blood nikal raha hai… Agar mein bandhi nahi hothi na then I would have just gone there… Koi kholdo pls.. Fir se dono ke beech fight… Suddenly kunj mere godh (lap)… He have closed his eyes….

Pov ends….

Actually this happens with me when kunj and uv fight on tv…

(Readers I m giving u summary to avoid confusion)

NOTE: Kunj have fought with uv’s men before coming to uv…

“Itni jaldi nahi uv” (“not so fast uv”) kunj said this and gave a punch on his face and uv falls down.. Next uv punches kunj and he falls down… So twinkle said Kunj… In her mind… They get into serious fight either uv taking power or kunj… They both were fighting when uv pushes kunj and he falls on ground and his head in twinkle’s lap… He is covered with blood and eyes closed….

Twinkle: (mouth tied) ummm…. (thinks) kunj yeh kya hua tumhe utho…,plz kunj utho…
(Kunj plz get up…what happened to u??)

She cries… The tear drop falls on kunj’s eyes… kunj slowly opens his eyes… He looks at her struggling and crying… His heart aches to see his life tied in a chair and face devastated by continues crying… He slowly cups her face… She too looks at him and they get into painful eyelock which shows pain, guilt, love, anger everything… Which is later broken by kunj who released her…

Both suddenly heard gun shot… Uv points gun towards kunj but kunj takes it from him… They again get into a fight and now kunj takes the control… Kunj points the gun towards uv who have fallen in ground… Uv looks at twinkle…

UV: twinkle dek na kunj kya kar raha hai hw can he… Mai tera pyaar hun na… Plz mujhe bacha le…
(Twinkle see what kunj is doing.. Hw can he? I m ur love isn’t it… Plz help me..)

Kunj feels hurt listening this… While this time uv takes the gun and now again fight…( I know u all are getting bored but what can I do… Its needed)

Uv points the gun towards twinkle but police comes at the same time and arrests him… They take uv but uv whispers to kunj

UV: srry kunj… Tujhe tere pyaar se alag rakhne ke liye but now u propose her… Mai use maarne wala nahi thi…
(Sorry kunj. I had to keep ur love away from u but now u propose her. I was not going to kill her)
I have said everything to her… Bcz I have gone through same pain… And I don’t want it happen with u too…

Kunj feels shocked and looks at him… He gets his answer when uv signs him that his lover is dead now…

After that twinkle comes running to him and hugs him then touches her forehead with him…

#End….

#Don’t be shocked yaar.. Actually I wanted to end it here but hw could I not fulfill my reader’s wish so kuch scenes add karne ko baaki hai…#

#Continue…

Kunj was still in a shock so he didn’t responded her but when he came into his sense he jerked her… She looked at him shocked…

Kunj: twinkle plz I m sorry par mai tujhe maaf nahi kar saktha… Tujhe mujh par bharosa nahi tha tab aur tu tho yahi chahthi thi na ke main yahan se chala jaaun so teek hai… Mai jaa hi raha tha ke mujhe tere kidnap hone ki khabar mili… Main yahan dauda chala aya..
(Twinkle I m sorry but I can’t forgive you. U had not trusted me that day and u wanted me to leave na so I was leaving but had to return as I got the news about u being kidnapped. I came as fast as I can)

Twinkle listens this being guilty because she knew she was wrong… Kunj removes her hand from his hand slowly and turns away from her… she stands there being shocked and tears rolling from both of their faces…

Screen freezes when twinkle leaves his hand and kunj turning away…

To be continued….
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Hw was it?? Sorry for boring u all… I’ll try to post asap… Thanks for commenting once again…

Drop ur comments whether +ve or -ve… Suggestions are always welcome… If any confusion do ask me… Plz avoid mistakes…

Byee…

Love u all…

TAMANNA

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