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Koi aapsa Abhigya,Swasan,Tanshi FF Part12,13

In the last update I saw the comments of lots of TanShi fans.I was surprised to see TanShi fans commenting on my FF.A big thanks to Shreya,Tanshi, Aqsa.
Special thanks to Kavita,Arshi,Aheli, Heatsha8176,Piyali who always make my day with long comments.


Sanskar goes near Swara:Swara..
Swara starts avoiding Sanskar.
Swara walks away tearfully not responding to him.
he gets depressed.he goes 4 foot ball.since his mind was full of that pain,he fails in it.
Damini phones Swara:i’m Sanskar’s mom.u made my son an irresponsible guy. so he even started losing his interest in his favourite football games.i wanted 2 see him as a famous football player.but bcoz of u…
Swara weeps.
Swara goes 2 Sanskar.he becomes happy.
SANSKAR:Swara..i’m so happy…u know i hid my feelings 4 u.but now i can’t help myself.i luv u.

Swara’s eyes welled up with tears.
SANSKAR:do u luv me?
SWARA:why r u failing in football now?
SANSKAR:i dunno,i can’t concentrate now,my mind is full of u.4 u i’ll even leave football which is my all time favourite.
Swara,do u luv me?
SWARA:maybe,but only if u become a big football player,i’ll think about a wedding.
SANSKAR:u r that selfish?that means u don’t luv me.u luv only the football player in me.

Sanskar was shocked:Swara!
SWARA:i’m practical,not a person like u who lives in a dreamworld.how can i fall 4 a person who is nothing in his career?luv is not enuff 2 liv in this world.
Sanskar’s eyes get filled up with tearTanu:i never expected this from u.It means u don’t luv me,don’t worry,i won’t disturb u again with my luv.
he goes. Swara cries.

the college life of pepsi is going 2 end.
Pragya weeps:i’ll miss ‘pepsi’.how can i leave Abhi,if college gets over,what will i do? she looks at the college compound.
she remembers dancing along with Abhi and enjoying during the initial days of college.

Chalein Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan, Udein Jaise Parinde Gagan Gagan
Jaayein Titliyan Jaise Chaman Chaman, Yun Hi Ghoomoo Main Bhi Magan Magan
Main Deewaani Dil Ki Rani, Gham Se Anjaani
Kab Darti Hoon, Vo Karti Hoon, Jo Hai Thaani
Chalein Jaise…Gagan Gagan
– Main hoon na}.

PRAGYA:I will miss those wonderful moments.But I can’t lose Abhi.i’ll reveal my luv 2 Abhi.
Abhi thinkTanu:i’ll reveal my luv 2 Tanu. both of them dream about it.


Rishi is taken to the girl to see her by Raj and Rano.The girl comes with tea and sweets.
Raj:Rishi..look at the girl.
The irritated Rishi does’nt look at her.
Raj is embarrassed. To cover it up he says:Though Rishi is a Doctor he is very shy.
Everybody laughs.
Raj suppresses his anger and calls Rishi sweetly:Rishi beta..look at her.
Rano whispers in Rishi’s ears:Rishi..look at the girl.Otherwise they will feel insulted.You remember my promise that I will not let this wedding happen if you don’t like her.You just came to see her,not to marry her.Look at her.See her face once.
Rishi nods and looks at her.


Rishi can’t believe his eyes.
It is Tanu.He smiles being surprised to see her.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai

Tanu remembers colliding with him once and Rishi helping her to take covers from the floor.
Automatically a smile appears on her face.

Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

They share a sweet eye lock.

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Everybody smiles.
Tanu’s dad:Let Rishi and Tanu talk in private.
Raj:Ok.Rishi..go talk to Tanu.
Rishi smiles.Both of them go to another room to talk.
They both are shy to talk.Finally both look at each other to talk at the same time:Actually…
They giggle.
Rishi:To be frank I am really surprised.I don’t know what to say.I never thought that the girl will be you.I mean…I remember seeing you before.
Tanu smiles:Even I did’nt expect the boy to be you.Mumma just said that papa’s friend’s son is coming to see me.

Har ghari saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Ranu:I too remember seeing you before.

Rishi is happy.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai

Rishi:Have you ever thought of me after meeting me that day?
Tanu is embarrassed:No..
Rishi:It’s ok.But from now onwards I will make you remember every moment.
Tanu blushes.

Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Rishi looks at her deeply:You are just like how you were in my dreams.

Aankhon mein ankhen teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri

Tanu is confused:What?
Rishi:I used to see you in my dreams every day.

Mera na mujh mein kuch raha hua kya

Tanu can’t believe it:What?

Rishi:Love at first sight..

Baaton mein baatein teri

Tanu is stunned:What?
Rishi:So I was’nt even interested to come here.But this visit surprised me.Because you are the girl.

Raatein saugatein teri

Tanu is very happy inside:Really?
Tanu:How can someone be so crazy about me?

Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya

Rishi:I don’t know.But I just know that just one glance of yours made me crazy.
She smiles in surprise:Rishi..

Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

Rishi:You know my name?
Tanu:Yes.Mumma had told me.
Rishi:But I don’t know your name.
Tanu:My name is Tanu.
Rishi calls her sweetly:Tanu…it suits you perfectly.
She smiles.

Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

They come out of their room.
Tanu’s dad:Rishi beta..did you like Tanu?
Rishi is silent.
Raj and Rano are tensed.
They think:Will Rishi do any blunder?
Rishi smiles:I liked Tanu.I am ready for this marriage.
Raj and Rano are relieved and happy.
Tanu’s dad:Tanu beta..what do you say?
Tanu blushes:I am also ready for this marriage.
They all are very happy.

Rishi and parents reach home.
Raj:Rano..see..I told you that Rishi will like Tanu.
Rano:Rajji..a big applause to you.
Raj smiles victoriously.Suddenly Rishi hugs Raj:Thank you dad for finding Tanu for me.I just love her a lot.
Raj and Rano are stunned.
Raj:Love at first sight.Great..
Rishi goes to his room shyly.Raj Rano giggle.

Swara sees her parents fighting. she weeps.She loses control and screams:plz stop it..since my childhood u both were like this.always fights,no peace at home.the only relief was college…my friends…we pepsi gang was enjoying.but papa u spoiled everything.u broke my relationships.u wanted 2 break my relationship with Sanskar.so u wanted 2 giv him a bad image of a drunkard.it took Sanskar away from me.now i’m nothing 2 him.
Swara cries.her parents feel sad.
dad:i’m sorry beti..
she did’nt reply ,but shed tears.Her dad goes 2 drink.she becomes angry & breaks his bottle. SWARA:when u become sad and happy why do u want 2 drink?this habit destroyed our peace.
dad:i’m sorry,i’ll never drink again.promise.
Swara and mom become happy.
dad:i’ll bring Sanskar back.
Swara thinks about Damini.
SWARA:no papa,Sanskar has gone away from me.i don’t want him back by hurting others.

Pragya goes 2 reveal her luv to Abhi.she holds a rose.seeing Abhi from a long distance ,she hides the rose behind. From behind Abhi cumes 2 her with a smiling face:i luv u..
Pragya was surprised and smiles.
A:if i tell this 2 Tanu,wil she tell yes?
Pragya was shocked.her eyes start getting teary.
A:why r tears in ur eyes?
Pragya wipes her tears:bcoz of happiness.ur luv will win Abhi. i’m really happy that ur mind is filled with luv.

Abhi smiles.he hugs her.then goes.Pragya tears the rose into pieces.
while Abhi was preparing 2 go 2 Tanu,she came 2 him:there is a surprise.
A:wow!whats that?
TANU:my wedding is fixed.
Abhi was shocked:what? no,i’ll not believe this.u r fooling me.
TANU:no,i’m serious.my parents chose him for me.
A:but an ambitious girl like u ready 2 marry whoever the parents choose?i can’t believe.
TANU:He is my dad’s friend’s son.So my parents are aware of his family back ground.he had come 2 see me.i talked 2 him.i realised that he is very intelligent,fun loving and….. lovable too.
She blushes.
Tanu:he suits me.i understood that my parents chose the right person for me.
Abhi becomes very upset.
A:all the best Tanu.
TANU:thanku ..
she smiles.
A:whats that lucky person’s name?
TANU:Rishi.he is a doctor.
he smiles.

Abhi-Pragya were crying because of the luv failure at the same time in their own houses.

The same time Tanu is dreaming of Rishi revealing how he fell for her and how he loves her like crazy.She blushes.

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Rishi is on cloud nine thinking of this surprise gift from his dad.He smiles and is excited thinking of his meeting with Tanu.

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi(Jab we met).

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